First Draft to Island Records

This is the first draft of our letter to Island Records, where we ask for permission to use the song.
Obviously there shall be some changes but this is what I could think of and I'm waiting to see what Sophie thinks of it.
So, VOILA!

Dear Sir/Madam/Whomever it may concern/Island Records,

We are writing to ask permission to use the song ‘Little Lion Man’ by Mumford and Sons in our A2 (G324) Media Coursework. It is for the Advanced Portfolio in Media. If we receive permission to use this song we would attempt to create:

- A Music Video for the song
And then two of the following three options:
- A website homepage for the band
- A cover for its release as part of the Digipak (CD/DVD Package)
- A magazine advertisement for the Digipak (CD/DVD Package)

Of course the people used in this video will be unrelated to the band, and the video and other creations will NOT be sold or released to the public on sites such as ‘Youtube’. The only people to see this will be ourselves, our peers (for peer marking) and the examination board.

We eagerly await your reply on the matter.

Yours Sincerely/Faithfully,

Alex Newcombe & Sophie Brown